Wowzers! What feedback!! Kate caught some of my foibles throughout and I’m so grateful for all her thoughts. I was a bit taken aback at first, but followed her direction and let it sit with me, then went back and read through again. Almost all of her suggestions were nail-on-the-head type stuff and I spent the day working on revisions. I wish I could afford to have her copy edit for me, but I want to save my funds for her to beta read the next in the series.