If you’ve been on query awhile with little to no feedback, or just really want all your submission materials critiqued, then the Submission Package review is the service for you.
I’ll take a look at your query letter, synopsis, and opening chapters (≤ 20,000 words) and assess the total package like an acquisition editor would. You’ll get a report (≥ 4 pages) that details what does and doesn’t work (and why), suggestions to strengthen your submission, as well as any key selling points you can use to attract interest.
This is your chance to pilot test your submission material and revise them before you officially go “On Query”.