The opening chapters of your book are the most vital. They hook the reader, introduce the main plot, and showcase the world and characters you’ve created. Most importantly, they set up your story and the reader’s expectations for the rest of the book. They need to dazzle.
This service gives you a developmental edit of the first 20,000 words of your book (with in-manuscript comments via Track Changes), and an editorial letter that assesses: what you’ve done well, what could be strengthened, the questions I hope the rest of the manuscript will (should) answer, the overall attractiveness and marketability of your story.